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Friday, 17 August 2012

My Narrative Story

As I was waking up I could hear my mum shouting out! “Get up and feed the worms!”. When I started to wake up I was shivering with fear, when I started to get change I could still hear my mum moaning to me saying “Hurry up and come down”. I started to get changed so I could feed the worms that we had in our backyard. As I finally finished getting changed I tip-toed as quietly as I could down the dusty old stairs. When I got down the stairs my mum was standing in front of me I was feeling worried because I had took for ages to get down and feed the worms, when my mum had finished talking to me, I was relieved because she was giving me the freaks. When I was finished that, I went to get the scraps from in the laundry, when I went to go in and get it I could hear a noise coming from the worm farm. So I rushed out to see what was the noise, when I got outside I couldn’t believe my eyes there were centipedes all over the place.  I screamed “AAAAHHH!” Mum there are centipedes all over the place.          




BUT...


The centipede were having a war with the worms, it was so funny because you couldn’t really see them having war because they were so small that you couldn't even see them, . All the creatures were getting ready to fight because the centipedes took all the food that I have been giving them each day. When the war began to start I was covering my eyes because I was so scared that somebody was going to get hurt. I told them to stop twice but they couldn't hear me of course. My stomach had butterflies in it because I was getting a little sick because it was the most terrible thing that ever happen to me. The worms began to slither onto the centipedes legs it was so sticky when I went to put some more food scraps into the worm farm because I got stick all over my hand and it was so sticky that I couldn’t get of. My teeth began to chatter because I began to feel the wind come over me, I could here my mum’s voice coming from the house it sounded like she was cooking tea for us. So I went inside to have a shower and dinner.



Until...


When I went inside  mum gave me a nice hot bath I began to think what were the centipedes and worms were doing, I was thinking that they were in the worm from having a sleep from the war that they had today. My mum was trying to wash of the sticky stuff that I had on my hands it eventually came off. When I was finished having a bath I went downstairs to have dinner, I was starving because I had a very long day today, we had meatballs and spaghetti for dinner it was so delicious. After dinner I was so tired so I had to go bed, my mum came and tuck me into bed and she said “Goodnight”. I began to shut my eyes and go to sleep.`                                                                           

1 comment:

Miss Kyla said...

I really enjoyed your narrative Hine! I liked that I could hear your personal writer's voice. Well done for making this story your own.

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